Division 4’s mystery stories are up and ready to be shared. The children worked through the writing process remembering to add the special literary devices and adjectives to enhance their stories while trying to appeal to the reader’s 5 senses. The boys and girls proofread, self-edited, and peer-edited their work before creating their awesome illustrations and book cover.
To incorporate the use of technology, each student used the Ipad app, “Educreations” and audio taped themselves reading a loud their own story and took photos of their illustrations. Click on the links to hear their stories or if you have an android phone and have any free app that scans QR codes you can just scan the QR codes below. If you have an Ipad, you need the free app “Educreations” and a free scanning app.
Here are some pictures of the children enjoying each other’s stories!
If you can’t scan the QR codes you can just click on these links to hear the stories too! ENJOY! : )
Keisha’s Story Group 4 Stories
Mystery Stories Group 1 Stories
That was so fun using that app [EDUCREATIONS] on the ipad. Writing the story was so much fun. I love reading other peoples story’s and I hope people enjoys mine. Thank you Miss. Gabas for planing us fun and cool activities and I will love to use the Ipads again.
Thank You!!!
I’m glad you enjoyed using the Ipad to record your stories. It is fun to share and read each other’s stories. Your welcome! I like seeing you all so engaged!
Ms. G
The stories were funny,mysterios and they had alot of tension. I hope we will be able to write stories again sometime. : – )
I liked tamias story. I was really
Scared about the moving picture!
I aslo liked Sara’s. I was super curious.
I liked Sunnys. I liked the drawing!!!!!!
Sora I loved your story the pictures were so cute
Sora had been struggling with creating her story.
It was very interesting because her real life has influence on her story.
Ms.Gabas, thank you very much for sharing your class project with us. I would like to read everybody’s stories!
Yukari(Sora’s mom)
It was a process! Writing takes a lot of work and time. Thanks for taking the time to look at the stories.
Ms. G
I enjoyed writing and reading the story that I wrote. My favourite story was Evil Cakes by Ethan. I liked it because it made me laugh when the scientist revives the main character.
by Brian
Awesome! I’m glad you are enjoying hearing everyone’s stories. You have written a fantastic story, too. I will have to read Ethan’s now…you’ve got me curious!
Ms. G
I like the story thing to because we get to use the ipad to record our voice and say the story. I like everybody not just one person’s story.
Cameron
I loved listening to the stories I loved the drawings they all looked so good .
I love listening to all the stories! I also like listening to Keisha’s, Sonia, and Renee story’s, its all very interesting! In Keisha’s all the characters are very athletic, in Sonia’s story they re scared of a shadow in an old house and Renee’s story is very good too! i love using the ipads and hope we could do more cool projects with the ipads. thank you Ms. Gabas for thinking of awesome projects.
THANK YOU
Ivan
They turned out great! Glad you enjoyed the activity!
Ms.G
I liked using the Ipad. my favourite story was evil cakes.
it was kind of funny. I hope we can use the ipad again.
thanks ms. Gabas for letting us use it
p.s gurbakhsh is on the blog writing his at my house
Glad you are working on your project together? I like how everyone enjoys using the technology!
I really liked that we got to use the iPad on educreations (it was my favorite part even though that’s all we did). I really hope we do something with the iPads again. Thanks for letting us use the iPads and it turned out great.
To Miss. Gabas From Sara
I agree they did turn out great!
i really liked the app educreations! it was really fun to watch and listen to other people’s stories! i didn’t really have a fav. one but i enjoyed them all! thank you mrs. Gabas! 😀
Yes! It’s a great app! It is fun to hear people reading their stories.
Ms.G
Those story’s are… A.W.E.S.O.M.E!
My favorite one is Evil Cakes, it is pretty funny when he finds a rocket launcher in a cupboard! Why would the owner of the bomb shelter keep a rocket launcher in a cupboard? Thanks Mrs.Gabas for letting us use the I. Pads, they were awesome! I liked it when we were allowed into the hall to read each other’s, Cameron was reading the Evil Cakes to us.( like a story teller)
Once again thanks Mrs. Gabas for letting us do the entire thing!
Morgan
Your welcome Morgan! It was nice watching you all enjoying your stories together.
Ms. G
I had a great time writing our stories! Also reading our story and posting it on the blog was an amazing idea!! In my opinion, I really enjoyed hearing/reading Soina’s story. I enjoyed hers since the kids, Max, Janie, Carrie, Leo, and Sam thought there was a ghost at a old house but their friend, Sam, was just playing a prank since Sam just bought the old house and Sam’s mom was the ghost. And I think that everyone else sounded great too!
Sunny
I liked her idea too! I’m glad you enjoyed hearing everyone’s stories!
Ms. G
I loved everybody’s stories, especially Allison’s, for there was really good suspense and scariness in each of them. All of the illustrations are quite advanced and detailed. Thanks Ms. Gabas for letting me do five full pages!
I know it can be hard for you to stop writing! : ) I always enjoy reading what you write.
Ms. G
Gaines story was full of suspense and horror ahhh! It was very good!
Giannes es story was full of suspense and horror ahhh! It was very good!
Gurbakshs story had so much passion in the story he copied all the characters that are already in story’s like Greg Heffly Roderick Dallas Zeus Patrick from sponge bob to!
thanks Kai, your illastrasions are awsome +cretive wich combined together is unbelievabley cool!I wish i had your aristic ability,with that i would draw my favoroute hero from my favoroute book percy jackson all the time!
I loved writing the stories although it was a very long process…the writing and typing and drawing but now I am improving in my writing .
I loved writing those story’s the writing the drawing and typing it was so much fun .
I really need to read evil cakes now!!!
I loved Sunny’s story because it was amazing the illustration
I also liked Sara’s because it made me very curious
But over all , all the stories were really good!