My Limericks Poem

My Limericks Poem

There was a young lady named fan

who had a pet named Han.

She went to her house

and found out that her Han had made a mess.

But she didn’t know that was just the start.

1 thought on “My Limericks Poem

  1. Your poem tells a nice short story. Take a very close look at line 1 and line 3. Say each one out loud. Listen to the rhythm, because you have got it exactly right in these two lines.

    there WAS a young LAdy named FAN

    she WENT to her HOUSE

    Every line in a Limerick needs to have that weatk STRONG weak pattern. It is tricky, but to me that’s what makes writing interesting – playing with the words & experimenting to find what works.

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