One of the things that Division 7 has been focusing on is adding interesting, descriptive words to our writing. We want to use language in creative and playful ways to develop style. One of our strategies for doing this is our “juicy” words list. Each student has a list of words in their reference duotang that they can use whenever they are searching for a new word to use.
Another way we expand our word knowledge is through our weekly mentor sentence activity. Each Tuesday a sentence is chosen from one of our read-alouds. The sentence is one that we can look up to (a mentor!) as aspiring writers. Students work in their morning routine books and write what they “notice” about their sentence (interesting words, punctuation, structure). Then they copy out the sentence (double-spaced!) and label as many parts of speech (nouns, verbs, adjectives, etc.) as they can. Students that want a challenge can try to rewrite the sentence to make it boring or write their own sentence that imitates the style of the sentence. Here are some examples of our past mentor sentences:
- “When the tall, thin lady behind the counter asked me what I wanted, I pointed to a gold-tipped pen as blue as the winter sky.” – The Gift by Aliana Brodmann
- “At lunchtime, we walked around the school yard, our fingers laced together, whispering secrets into each other’s ears.” – Each Kindness by Jacqueline Woodson
- Dust came in waves, getting in their eyes and in their noses, until they could hardly breathe. – Shin-chi’s Canoe by Nicola Campbell
Last week I asked the students to write about snow. When I read what they wrote, I was incredibly proud of the interesting sentences that I saw! I picked out one excellent sentence from each student’s writing. We read them as a class and I want to share them with the rest of our community (you!). Click here to read Division 7’s mentor sentences about snow.
I also noticed that something we need to work on as a class is the structure of our writing. We are going to start focusing on paragraph structure and sequencing our ideas logically to make sure our writing stays focused and on-topic.