Monday, may, 30, 2016 reflection miguel alvarado #1
Listening and watching Maestro tovey reminded me of how hard the times were past, how it hurt to be living, how we questioned are lives, but he reminded me of how hard it is sometimes how around the world people are suffering and i’m here doing nothing to save them and all, but ya i know sometimes you can’t save your precious ones in your life but you can always help someway it also reminded me of how music is a big part of my life it reminded me of when i was on my mom’s lap and she sung me a lullaby or when i was about to go to school and i put some music and dressed myself up, at the speed of light, then id go to the dinner table to eat breakfast and my mom would give me breakfast and all i could think about was music, and whenever i was sad i’d put a good cheerful song to boost up my sense of steam. Music will always be apart of my life, i always wonder what would my mornings be without music, or waking to the groove, what would my life be like without music, have you ever wondered what it would feel like without the sad music in movies and i’d always imagine the happy song in the bad movie. You know maestro tovey really reminded me so much about my past…BUT this Reflection is not only sad depressing corney reflection to get views, nope this is gonna be happy to soo i mean you can exit if you want but, it was funny how he was playing a song called WHY and while he was playing WHY he started to say in the middle of the rhythm WHY…WHY…WHY everyone in the crowd was laughing even the teachers i looked to my right Ms.Con was laughing as well i guess you could say music is inspiration.
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First, you need to review our online guidelines and make at least one important edit.
Second, reading your reflection made me smile; thanks.
Third, I’m glad Maestro Tovey’s talk and performance was particularly powerful for you.
Fourth (& at your invitation from your last paragraph), I found parts of your post difficult to follow. Often, just when you would begin an interesting idea, it seemed you’d abandon the topic or cut it short (often mid-sentence) only to begin a different thought. Is this your first draft? Your writing would be more powerful, and it would be easier for you to develop your thinking, if you finished your sentences and grouped them around related topics. It would then probably be easier for you to take your ideas further. It would also be easier for your readers to follow you.