02/08/22 – ELA Writing – CHAIRS ON STRIKE

Oh no! Our chairs have gone on strike! Our chairs have decided to go on strike because of the following reasons:

  1. You are growing quickly and are getting quite heavy!
  2. Conditions are dirty and unsanitary.
  3. Physically exhausted and not treated with respect.

Read what they wrote below!

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Here are some reasons to…

  1. Get our chairs back / things we will do differently.
  2. Have our chairs stay on strike forever / not want them back.

 

We are focusing on the first paragraph only today: the introduction. Create your own introduction paragraph (and brainstorm your 3 reasons) to either…

  1. Persuade the chairs to come back
  2. Tell the chairs that you no longer need them
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01/02/22 – ELA Writing – Persuasive / Opinion Writing Structure

Today we learned about the structure of persuasive writing. It is a 5 paragraph essay that begins with an introduction paragraph, 3 body paragraphs, and a concluding paragraph.

Notice the different colours used in our “hamburger” graphic organizer.

  • Red ‘easy to take care of’ is a preview for the 1st body paragraph
  • Green ‘they have incredible instincts’ is a preview for the 2nd body paragraph
  • Blue ‘they are independent’ is a preview for the 3rd paragraph

Your job tonight is to post your introduction sentence! It should be no longer than one single sentence. Your goal is to communicate to readers what the rest of this essay is going to be about. Keep it simple and make it interesting so that I want to continue reading it!

 

Here are 2 example of what you might post is: 

  • Cats are unique pets that will make your life better!
  • A cat is the best four-legged companion that you need in your life!

11/23/21 – ELA Writing – Continuing with our Snowperson Instructional Writing

Due next Tuesday, November 30.

  • We took our individual how to build a snowperson steps and combined them into a paragraph.
  • The expectation for next Tuesday is that you combine these sentences into a paragraph on a lined sheet of paper. Make sure to follow paragraph form.
    • Indent the first sentence.
    • Make sure to check for grammar, spelling, and punctuation.
    • Fix these and make your as free from errors as possible.

Please see our class example below:

We will be swapping our work with someone else to peer edit next week.

 

10/20/21 – ELA – HOW TO… PROCEDURAL Writing

We worked on starting our main writing unit this term. We will focus on procedural writing, also known as HOW-TO writing.

I did a demonstration on how to brush my teeth using students’ initial instructions. It did not go well!

Watch this video to see why procedural writing is important!

Once done, take a look at the worksheet and begin revising your initial instructions. I will be bringing in my toothbrush, toothpaste, and cup next week and will once again, try to use your instructions to brush my teeth… live… in front of you.

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10/06/21 – ELA Writing – Magic Words and 5 Senses in Our Writing

Today we worked on developing our sentences. We turned them from…

“I like sushi” to what you see in the picture below. We used magic transition words to extend our sentences to allow our readers to visualize our words. We also banned the word because.

Build three full and grade level sentences.  Make sure to take a look at the example in the first picture.

 

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