Practice with “Show Don’t Tell”
Review slides https://can01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/GetUrlReputation
Worksheet #1 https://www.csustan.edu/sites/default/files/2022-02/showingvstelling_revised.pdf
Worksheet #2 http://mrscarll.weebly.com/uploads/7/9/8/4/7984859/_show_dont_tell.pdf
On a separate piece of paper, write the TELLING and SHOWING sentences for this video.
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P.S. The Bread
P.P.S. What is second breakfast?
It was so funny when the bread angel slowly flapped its wings in the baker’s stomach/ bread heaven .It was also funny when it crumpled itself up in order not to be eaten whenever a customer came but got eaten at the end of the day by the baker.This was such a funny random video.
It was very funny when the bread crumpled up itself in order for the customer not to buy it and therefore not be eaten.When the baker ate the last survivor of the bread he made ,it was so funny when the bread slowly flapped its wings in the baker’s stomach/bread heaven.This random bread video was so funny.
This film was really funny. It was really funny when the bread became an angel when it got eaten, the same thing for when it made itself look ugly so that the customer doesn’t buy the bread and when it realized that it would get eaten if it got picked by one of the customers. This random bread video was the most random thing I watched.
My favorite part was when the bread made himself look ugly so it wouldn’t get eaten. It was so random! When the bread DID get eaten by the baker, it flapped its white angel wings slowly and drifted away from the bakery!