My Limericks Poem
There was a young lady named fan
who had a pet named Han.
She went to her house
and found out that her Han had made a mess.
But she didn’t know that was just the start.
My Limericks Poem
There was a young lady named fan
who had a pet named Han.
She went to her house
and found out that her Han had made a mess.
But she didn’t know that was just the start.
Your poem tells a nice short story. Take a very close look at line 1 and line 3. Say each one out loud. Listen to the rhythm, because you have got it exactly right in these two lines.
there WAS a young LAdy named FAN
she WENT to her HOUSE
Every line in a Limerick needs to have that weatk STRONG weak pattern. It is tricky, but to me that’s what makes writing interesting – playing with the words & experimenting to find what works.