|Auggie was deformed but when he went to his new school he got bullied by Julian.Because he looked different then everyone there but then Auggie meant this guy. Jack he wanted to be friends with Auggie was wondering why Jack wanted to be friends but Auggie had time to think about it and he accepted it |Summer was always there for Auggie summer was also nice to him because he barely had no friends to talk to when they walked past Julian he didn’t say anything maybe there was something wrong| Julian of course was the big mean bully to August because he was deformed but guess what Jack help him a’lot when Auggie didn’t do anything helpful to Jack in anyway at all Jack is a friendly friend|Auggies mom is a caring loving mom she is there for Auggie if he needs her but his mom is a caring love for Auggie to handle but Auggie talked to his mom about it but his mom didn’t lestien to him and she loved him to much|Jack was a nice guy but there was Julian and of course he was a bully to Auggie his friends were a gang Julian was a part of it kind of so they would bully Auggie because he looked different then everyone else
i think that you are right, that Auggie was bullied just because he looked different.i also think that you should have changed the title because Auggie is not deformed he just was born a little bit different.Nice job! (:
I agree 🙂 and disagree 🙁 with you. But i wouldn’t give August the tittle of “deformed” all together. On the other hand I agree with everything else. Your writing was GREAT. Nice job Kyle.
I know i wanted to change it but i didn’t relize it tho
I like this post because it talked about the different characters that knew August a lot. This is a great lesson because it technically means that if you look at someone and they look a little different, it doesn’t mean they are a bad guy. But I don’t think Julian was mean to August because Julian was a bully in the first place. Remember when Julian said “Supposably” instead of “Supposedly”, and August corrected him?
What if August didn’t correct him? Would they be friends? Anyways, this a good post! 🙂