Should Restaurants Serve Seal?
Yes I think we should put seal on the menu because people are allowed to kill 400,000 seals a year but people only 35,000 per year. Also their meat is so healthy and it has a lot of vitamin A and C. And plus if you eat fish or any other animal it’s no different to eat seal, because some people just don’t want to eat them because their cute. So if you don’t eat them because their cute you’re basically just judging.
But if you eat to much you can make them extinct because they can’t reproduce that fast so soon extinct. Also you can mess up the food chain, so if seals are extinct polar bears can’t eat and if polar bears can’t eat then how can humans eat because people in the north eat polar bears so if seal die polar bears die, and if polar bears dies humans die.
Your opinion statement is clear. Your writing needs some organization with transition sentences and a concluding sentence.